Other people said that they liked how I made my poems come together with my titles. I loved writing and I think that writing poems are my specialty. They liked how my poems had different emotions to go with the titles. They enjoyed the description of each poem that I wrote. They enjoyed how I connected each poem with everyday life. They enjoyed how I made each poem about how women look for love in all the wrong places. They liked how I wrote about how I connected my poems to how black women struggle with their children because the fathers aren’t around anymore.

I need to capitalize my letters in the middle of a line. Most of my feedback was the same. Each peers liked my poems andd thought that they could realte to some of them. I’m glad that people could read the first sentence and keep reading because they enjoyed that first line. iam going to continue to write poetry because it is a good way to express the way that  ifeel. It is also a good way to relate to other peopels feelings. I was given alot of great feedback that will help me in many different ways. I can’t wait until I have another writing class because the information that I was given is going to take me a long way from here. I am going to keep writing until I know that I have taken in everything that my teacher and my peers have taught me.

Being a write can be alot of work but you have to be willing to do it. I love to write because it’s a better way to express my feelings than expressing them out loud. I love to write because it motivates me to write and let other people read my writing. It also gives me the chance to know how other people feel about my writng. This lets me know that I can be a writer if I want to.

The reason I believe that this would be a best seller is because people will want to know reasons why friends come and go. They will also want to know the reasons why you friends are going and why new friends are coming. People will also want to know how to deal with situations like that when they are having problems with their friends. This book will be a best seller because people will be able to relate to what the book is talking about.

After writing this fairy tale I let three people read my story. First, Precious Henderson read it and she thought it was fun. Then, Mr. Weiler read over it and everything that Precious laughed at he laughted at. Finally, Tashai Washington read it but while reading it she did laugh but she thought my story was good.

During the time I started writing this story I thought it was going to be boring, but I see now that my story is going to be a wonderful story. When the story is done and finish it is going to be the best story ever.

After two weeks, my writing has improved a whole lot. I do not write like I use to write and I dont write as little as I use to.  I never t hought my writing would look like it has been lokking so far. This creative writing class has helped my writng a whole lot. I never thought I would become such a wonderful writer. This class will help me in the near future. when I get to college I will already have the writing skills that I will need.

I feel as though I will be able to help other people in their writing when they need help. When I first started writing i was writing very poorly. I use to think that my writng was the best, but when i would let my teacher revise it I had alot of mistakes. As I become a better writer I think about all the achievements that I have accomplished as a writer.